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Dark Daze (An Interactive Fanfic)

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Dark Daze (An Interactive Fanfic)

Postby Shiny Suicune » November 5th, 2006, 1:56 pm

This is a project for an Interactive fanfic of mine called Dark Daze, a dark and rather horrific tale of survival that takes place 10 years post the Battle Frontier season told in flashback format. I will post the prologue for the story right herre. Then it is up to the members to continue the story. This is how it will work, lets say member 'A' finsishes reading it, after he does, he will continue the story in a which he sees fit but will not end it instead will leave it hanging. The limit to how much you can write is 2 paragraphs of 300 words each so that everyone get's a chance. Then member 'B' will continue and so on and so forth. The only other rule is that the story must maintain its dark and disturning image; I dont want Ash to sit up in bed and start hysterically laughing screaming, "APRIL FOOL!!" lolz. Without much further ado, here is the prologue, read it well and continue it well.
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The scene is of a stormy night. A heavy downpour coupled with the occasional lightning strike gives the area a haunting look and feel. A Toyota Corolla is rolling down a road flanked by a beach on one side and a cliff face on the other. It is moving at a safe velocity. Fast enough to reach its destination on time though there was no hurry, yet slow enough so as not to skid and crash due to the wet and slippery road, jeopardizing the lives of its two passengers. We zoom in on the car’s windshield and see only a dripping wet glass screen constantly being wiped, hiding a dark face behind. A flash of lighting occurs; the face becomes visible only for a short second. A man roughly 30 yrs of age; light blue hair; an almost woman like face, sweet and comforting. He is driving the car. There is also a passenger beside him. Another flash of lightning; the passenger is a woman; again around 30 yrs of age; red hair; a stern almost man like face.
It seems as though the man and the woman have switched bodies, however these paradoxical characteristics are what keeps them together. They play each other’s roles on an emotional and spiritual though not on a physical plane.

They drive along the long straight road heading for home, but just then. Another flash of lightning appears; they turn towards the sea and see a shocking spectacle. A lone body lies on the beach face down, battered and bruised, as if it was the sole survivor of a horrific accident out in the sea. The car screeches to a halt, the two persons look and talk to each other, deciding to help the poor soul. They dash out into the rain. The man was wearing an expensive tuxedo and the woman was wearing an expensive gown herself, as if they had gone for a social gathering and were just returning. They were clearly rich but they still had a human and compassionate heart. They ran up to the body and noticed that there was a small creature beside him. A large mud covered and scratched mouse with a rounded body and a tail that vaguely resembled a thunderbolt. The man turned the body around, he could not see the face. He picked up his wrist, checking for a pulse, yes. It was there and this poor soul was clearly alive. Another lightning flash occurred; the face of the victim became clearly visible. The blue haired man screamed in shock, the red haired woman stared with wide eyes; she could not believe what she had just seen. The blue haired man spoke, “Jessica! It’s him...” Jessica muttered just one word under her breath. It came out barely audible,
“Ash?!”

Jessica makes a quick decision and replies, “C’mon James! We have to get them to our house” James nods in agreement and lifts Ash in his arms and takes him to the car while Jessica holds the mouse in her arms. They somehow manage to get them to their house, which was actually a large mansion. They quickly take Ash and the mouse, who was actually his first pokemon Pikachu, as well as his best friend. They take him to the master bedroom and lay him and Pikachu down on the bed, unconscious. Meowth, who was sleeping soundly on his own bed, heard the commotion while Jessie and James moved hastily up the steps. He ran into their bedroom and was shocked to find Ash and Pikachu in their current state. He gasps, “Oh My God! It’s that twerp and that mouse” Jessie orders one of the butler’s to go get a glass of cold water. Meowth obviously concerned about his old rival and new friend, jumps on the bed and starts to shake Pikachu, “Hey Mouse!! PIKACHU! What’s wrong? What happened? Wake up buddy!” James grabs the panicky Meowth and tells him to calm down. Jessie then takes the glass of cold water which the butler had just brought. She took some on her hand and started to splash it on his face, while James gently slapped Ash trying to bring him into consciousness, calling his name out all the while. Meanwhile, Meowth was trying to do the same with Pikachu; he hastily brought his water bowl and splashed it on Pikachu.

After a few minutes, a wet and weary Pikachu began to stir. James picked him up and quickly placed him under an electric blanket to get him warm. While James and Meowth tended to Pikachu, Jessie took care of Ash. His wet clothes had been removed and placed with new ones and he had been covered with a warm blanket. Pikachu woke up with a scream which startled all three of them. Pikachu woke up to unknown surroundings, it became scared. Meowth, grabbed Pikachu trying to calm him, Pikachu released a weak thunderbolt in fright. Meowth, after countless years of being shocked had all but become immune to them. Meowth tried to talk to him, “PIKACHU!!! CALM DOWN!!” He shook him a few times and Pikachu became calm. He vaguely realized where he was, Jessie and James’s mansion. Meowth had once told him about it during some social gathering a couple of years ago. Pikachu looked at Meowth with tear filled eyes and started to cry. It rested its head on Meowth’s shoulder and began to cry. Meowth hugged him and patted his back, “There! There! Mou.... Pikachu! It’s alright” James smiled at Meowth, he was proud of him. He then turned towards Jessie who frowned at Ash. James went close and put his arms lovingly around her, “Don’t worry Jessie! He’s alive! Just unconscious, he just needs to be nursed back to health, like Pikachu.”

They decide to let Ash rest for now. Meowth and Pikachu sleep in his bed together and Jessie-James sleep in the secondary bedroom. Next morning, one of the butlers announces that Ash had begun to stir and was calling out someone’s name. Jessie and James rush into the master bedroom in their night robes and see Ash moving in his bed with his eyes closed as if he were having a nightmare. He kept screaming the same name over and over again, “DON’T LET GO! DON’T LET GO!! WHATEVER YOU DO DON’T LET GO!!! MISTY!! DONT LET GO MISTY!!”

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Postby Pranz » January 4th, 2007, 4:23 am

LOL! KEWL! Quite interesting!! I eagerly await the sequel. :P
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Re: Dark Daze (An Interactive Fanfic)

Postby chocolate_fudge » May 2nd, 2007, 11:52 pm

hey it was a nice work of you
I am eagrly waiting for the next sequence.... :clap: :clap:
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